First continuity edit 

The first shot was not approved due to the fact of our videos from the camera work was not that great, because this was when me and Alex were Filming, two of the members of our group were absent so we'd go to the movies alone, for we asked Jamie to help us this film, in which he insisted he will hand hold the camera, which is why the shots came out so shaky and out of focus, as well as cutting this when it made the video cut to the quick clips from some the pace of the clip scene was so out of time.

Credits to Georgie